Re-draft
Here we show how we firdst began trying to film and what we needed to fix in order for it to fit the genre we were doing.
Our ideas have somewhat change from our preliminary ideas but it still has the same concept as before but it we decided to use dramatic irony with the voice over since the police think its a man that it dong the killing but it is actually a woman which will be heard in the voice over, It helps conforms to those stereotypes of villains being a man instead of a woman
I think that we should put up pictures of suspect and already have a suspect dead too make it more interesting and to try and do different editing techniques.
I think that we are struggling to find a suitable location with key lighting, Even though this room was better than our first one, the lighting is still to bright for the location and could be a bit darker and as well as that it could be more secluded than what we have made it
What we changed here is we tried to add our credits and also we started adding in the production company as well. I think that what ween wrong here was that we did not know how to add in the credits, this document shows our final credits.
The beginning of our draft was executed well, we used different types of cinematography, for example we tried to do a hand-held scene this made the scene look disorientated and a bit frightening, as when you see the person in front they look scared and bruised to open like this can give a shock to the audience grab their attention which c we want to do. We also used slow motion to enlighten the scene more and help the audience see a little more of the victim, we added close-up of her face to see just how much damage has been done to her.
One problem with our film, however is that the location for the office it does not give off that serious vibe that we are trying to convey, the lighting's also not good as well and over all does not look like a police headquarters, but just a study room , it brings down the adrenaline that we built up in the audience and lets the film down dramatically.
Overall, I think that in our film we used a range of cinematography in if , we tried to make our film start with a flash forward which I think can also be improved as well and can try to be a bit more obvious as well.
Our first location was in the Independent study room inside the bridge academy, we decided to change it so its suit s the style which we are going for. The study room did not look sophisticated enough to be the detective headquarters.
We needed a place were we could put up potential suspect, and people who have been victims of the Killer.
Also the room that they are in looks a bit messy and very busy with piles of work on top of their desk.
They have very dark lighting to emphasis how serious and dangerous their job is.
This video explains a bit more on how we need to improve.
First draft of filming: Changing location
